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Looking out my window
For the first time in forever,
There's snow.

     It's pretty.
     Espically high up.
     Accenting the branches,
     reviving my backyard with it's icy glow.

     It's ugly.
     Espically on the ground.
     Mixed in with dirt and grime
     An old reminder
     of lost speldor.

Looking out my window
For the first time in forever,
There's snow,

And it's oh so bittersweet.
©2008-2010 ~MichealCaesar
:iconmichealcaesar:

Author's Comments

sorry the picture's so small.... Anyway this is a poem about my january. I've just recently gotten home and alot of my return has been kinda bittersweet and so I used the image of my first day home when it really was snowing and I really was gazing out the window as my canvas to portray it on. It was longer and a bit more descriptive but I wasn't sure I liked it so I left it out. This is also my January entry for Electrobaby's Year Long Poetry/Photography/Prose/and Mixed Media Extravaganza(Sorry for renaming your event electrobaby but I needed to make it sound more appealing you seem short of particapants.) If you want in go to her page
[link]
and look in her journal the whole rules and description is in there. Anyway hope y'all like.

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:iconalecbell:
Neatly put together.

What a lovely image of disillusion, your dirty snow!

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